I'm sorry if I came across wrong/lost in translation.

I like your drawing style. I can see you pixelled it. I meant because every pixel does not appear to be methodically placed it borders on Oekaki (another style thats made with pixels too). I was just bringing up for discussion so I said 'hmmm'

I like the lineart, even if you hold the guitar weirdly. As stated before, you could clean up the lines a bit. What's weird is that this style and your Kristin pixel art don't even match up at all.

Nice improvement :)

thanks for all comments.
Sometimes my monitor pc dont help me to see somes tons colors.
=D

I get it and i will improve this.

I understand you want to stay true to your style, but there's a fine line between style and somewhat of a ... mess.   Come on, clean the lines up at little bit and it'll be a pretty cool piece.

Ok. I respect your opinion Jalonso.

But, was made pixel by pixel!
i just use the mouse to make this. i dont need to use pens.
;P

Unsure about this being PA, too oekaki in parts...hmmmm

You look like spock.