Great form. ('cept the hands are weird). Vana looks good. It's too monochromatic for gameboy COLOR. ;)

I like what you pulled off and how you used the colors, it looks great. The girl's hands look weird though and I'm not sure, but the folds in her dress kind of suggest she's facing a diagonal way, but her breasts are facing forwards. Keep up the good work.

For GB style its too wide : P
otherwise its good : )

Cool,  I like the colors.