I actually prefer this one too. The nose and cheeks make it look like the light source is coming from directly above. Maybe highlight the helmet and shirt with that in mind?
The face is great! Much better than the first portrait in my opinion. I love that expression. Looks like the shape of the helmet is a bit off, and something on the clothes is also bugging me.
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Nice, But blank expression ahha