each other :: Pixel Art Detail

Keren.. salam kenal

Inspired by Eboy?? Nice work!

sorry for double post... mixed up left/right. Meant to say that there's too much space on the right in the right bubble...

Interesting piece. I don't exactly dig the shading (or rather especially the lighting) on the trees with the round tops. Moreover, the light source there is inconsistent. Non-handmade font (even with automatic antialiasing) is a no-no in pixel art (sorry if I guessed wrong). Text in left bubble is also not centered (too much space on the left).

Anyway, i like it for the subject .

Maybe the walls are a bit too large for being one-colored (looks a bit boring). However, fancy texturing wouldn't fit the geometrical clean style anyway. Maybe you should go a little smaller next time, but with more objects, if you want the large scale, though.

If this is your first time pixel, I must give you props because I haven't seen anyone getting so much correct in the first time.

have u pixelled the font too?

Colors are cute :3

Was eboy's art the influence behind it :)?

I really like the houses, I think they're pretty much self sufficient.. in fact I'd kep them as they are with no extra gimmicks.. the trees could use some work though, as jal described :)

Nice idea, but I think that work not completed. Maybe if you add the stairways or several floors behind glass, picture will look better.

I think this is great. I would delete the white BG because it serves no purpose and actually takes away from the scene. One small detail that is wrong is the shadowing on the trunk of the pointy trees. Those same trees also use 3:1 lines on the greean layers where 2:1 would be better. On the round trees you flipped them (mirrored) but did not change the highlights to be universally lit, fix that.

*your first...really?