1. what larwick means by artistic growth is how you grow in skill 2. his legs can't be stiff because he has none 3. he is doing the moonwalk a head bob WILL change that the fuse has a black outline whereas the rest is colored 4.needs moar contrast between shades 5. you have used a gradient to blend the shade and the mid tone, use dithering instead 6. it would look a tad more realistic if his head rotated
I think it would generally be better if I edited it instead of criting it
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