hmm to nice character well done...

i understand what you mean about the eye and nose...yes, it is a bit long...

and now i see how wierd the hair looks---i'll have to practice on that.

hmmm.....

I thought the eyes should be moved lower.... the distance of the eyes from the bottom and the top of the face is about the same.... but you may want to move the eyes even lower if you want to go for the 'chibi factor'... ^_^

nose is too long....

there seems to be some clash in shading style for the hair... anime shading doesn't splice hair into too many strands....

wow, thats---surprisingly good~ *sighs in relief*

yea, i put the patch there for no good reason, now that i think about it. >,> im just glad its---decent, at least? ^^

Bad? Quite the contrary.

The pant's don't really need that dark patch though...