I was hoping it was something along those lines.

there was supposed to be an element of boldness to it to match the rest of what im doing thats why its black ^.^ ill post the mockup in a few days time tell me what you think then :D thanks for the crits tho

I agree with doomie, good overall!

maybe using a darker pink on the outline instead of black would help a lot.

I like the shading on thefluff : D I think that the anti aliasing could us a bit of work but nice ovreall :)