A very good effort. Love the scene and the neon color combo.

Yeah, I agree - the guys kinda sucked. I'm not even sure that you could see they were holding guns...

It was obvious I'd had to rush them, anyway. I've removed them and rejigged it a bit with 2 mins to go :)

And now I'm late for school...

T.H.I.S. K.I.C.K.S. A.S.S.!. I aggree that after technical marvels that you show on the guy in classic Wolfenstein/Flashback pose and on the letters and walls and everywhere faces of two people are too simplistic. Next steps for you I guess would be refinement of the style (and looking what works and what not in comics and videogames character design) and trying realistic looking faces and people's figures in various poses. So, I think it would be not strictly pixel, but on paper or somehow else as in pixel technique you've got pretty far.

Agreed, but a great entry non the less.

as far as im concerned, without those two in the background it would be much better.