There is not enough contrast between the typing and the background imo. It's not very readable this way. Also, the letters are pretty flimsy, they could be a bit thicker...
The detailing is excellent though, as is the background. Just needs a little tweaking for readability...
thanks for all the comments, keep em coming :) I decided that I will indeed add a ship, since I found a nice way to display them. here's a quick mockup with the 3D model I did of the ship. http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z180/Squirrelsquid/havoctitle16.gif I'll use a reference.
This is G R E A T! The text and (?stonework?) are really good work. The eye is distracting -- slow it down a bit and also increase the interval between its activity.
probably not, I realy can't see it anymore ;) I need to move on in the game and have to pixel the new menus, implement the boss and add some features here or there.
I placed a 3D rendering in there as a test, and it just didn't fit well. here's the test shot: http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z180/Squirrelsquid/havoctitle_test.gif and I might add, that the stars will scroll
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