Travel (click for full view)

Travel (click for full view)

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Travel (click for full view)



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Title: Travel (click for full view)
Pixel Artist: A.B. Lazer  (Level 3 Private Eye :: 9276 points)
Posted: 9/28/2007 15:34
Statistics:  22 comments    4 faves    0 avatars

I also write music. Now it is mostly electropop, high energy disco and electro. Soon I will make a compilation of my best tracks, put them on CD-Rs for my pals and this picture will be a cover. Hope you like this one. If not - please tell why.

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chess (Level 8 Shodan) @ 10/9/2008 05:34
more of exactly what you said :) i love that plane most. its cute

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 10/8/2008 19:17
In a way Swimsuit Special Logo and Yet Another Fighting Mockup are continuation of the same style or what you mean by LIKE THIS?

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chess (Level 8 Shodan) @ 10/8/2008 16:50
btw i STILL want you to do more pieces like this!

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 4/12/2008 06:58
Thanks, I like it too! I think when the plane arrived I decided to make the whole picture.

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iLKke (Level 9 Nidan) @ 4/11/2008 09:21
Love that chubby plane!            

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 10/11/2007 03:53
E-mailed.

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codetiger (Level 1 Rookie) @ 10/10/2007 22:17
contact me by email if you are taking pixel art work shankar@smackall.com

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codetiger (Level 1 Rookie) @ 10/10/2007 22:16
Do you work as freelancer for mobile game designing?

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 9/29/2007 18:00
Yeah, I had it's logo in my mind while drawing, not EMI or Epic. I remember spinning Zodiaks vinyl when I was a kid!

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Mykola (Level 3 Corporate Drone) @ 9/29/2007 07:33

oh that's great :D

lust liek those old MELODIYA logos on soviet vynils hahaa.. the 4a version is perfect!


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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 9/29/2007 04:35
I added a logo in lower half of picture for balance - it must look like any record company logo, here it is: http://www.ljplus.ru/img3/p/i/pinwizz/Travel_4a.png And here is logo variant which I scrapped becaurse it maybe looks not too clear (what do you think?): http://www.ljplus.ru/img3/p/i/pinwizz/Travel_4.png

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Mykola (Level 3 Corporate Drone) @ 9/29/2007 00:16

I really like the whole piece, especially with the updates.

My suggestion would be to move the picture+font a bit lower, to center tham a bit.

as of now the picture is centered, and the font is right above it, which results in a composition shifted upwards.


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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 9/28/2007 18:03
I see, but it goes quite well with music and retro idea. I think I should give some example (it's nearly one megabyte) : http://skill.ru/images/2006/04/29/130644.mp3

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 9/28/2007 17:51
Yeah, I think that lighter sky looks better, thanks to BlackDragon for primer. >>shift drastically I pixel in MSPaint, print on monochrome LaserJet, so it will be useful only when/if I'll order printing of the booklet.

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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 9/28/2007 17:36
Oh, that's way better (http://www.ljplus.ru/img3/p/i/pinwizz/Travel_3.png) The lighter sky is better looking. Bear in mind when you print on paper that these colors will all shift drastically.

FYI: pixel as RGB save as CMYK to test print colors then back to RGB till its what you like.

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BlackDragon (Level 11 Godfather) @ 9/28/2007 17:36
I like the new font, but doesn't really go with the theme. I say redo your old ones.

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 9/28/2007 17:33
Aha, looking critically, I see that especially R looks bad. I try to make it look like 70's album. I have moog album look in my mind, but it can be misleading, I think (like when you take CD with interesting look that makes you suppose that it is some kind of music but it turns out something different and actually distracts from appeal), caurse only one track sounds like moog album music. And I need to make all fonts all by myself. So here another version - is it looks better/same/worse to you? http://www.ljplus.ru/img3/p/i/pinwizz/Travel_3.png

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 9/28/2007 17:31
Thanks! It illustrates your poin clear. There was a question - what should be lighter - sea or sky. Lighter sky makes outlines of all what floats in the sky look clearer better. This cover should be relaxing for the eye. Lighter sky needs, hovever, lighter frame. I decided not to make pic so bright, so I took darker tone and seems that it's working - frame is the same not intensive color and balloon not sems so dark. I made it's tongue smaller to articulate that it's tongue, not teeth, and this changed version is here: http://www.ljplus.ru/img3/p/i/pinwizz/Travel_3.png

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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 9/28/2007 16:43
For a music CD the colors seem OK to me, especially the music styles mentioned. My crit is the font, its awful. Letters are just not balanced at all. Check out 'fonts for flash' and other pixel fonts for better ideas, some free ones in the links section.

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BlackDragon (Level 11 Godfather) @ 9/28/2007 16:09

Here is what I did:

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p203/blackdragon_photo_bucket/Travel-1.png


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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 9/28/2007 16:01
Thanks for comment, this picture was a lot of work! Can I ask you to recolor some areas so I could see your vision? There's practically no ditherng, so it will be pretty quick.

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BlackDragon (Level 11 Godfather) @ 9/28/2007 15:54
I like this a lot, especially the plane, but bad color choices make this peice look bad.

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