For me, it's the shape of the ship, as it's just an oblong at the moment. Your other piece had a more complex shape and more details in defining different heights by using darker shades (it also looked much more like a DDP ship). The height levels/layers doesn't really show that much on this particular piece so it looks a little flat.
I'm not to sure how helpful that was, but I still like it
Thanks for the comments everyone.. I totally agree that it needs more detail, weaponry etc.. I just got a little fed up with it because I couldn't get it to look like I wanted. Any suggestions on what to add? About the background; I gave it a black background since that was the most complimentary. It's supposed to go on a dark background like in ddp. I guess I'll have to put in a little more work.
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it's explained in the description of my other ship