I'm making (or at least trying to) a platform-adventure game, and this is a rather quick mockup of it. I just wanted to test and play with the palette (the sky and blue rocks/grass, the brown ground is just a filler). I would appreciate some C&C :)
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Well, for me this is a finished piece, but if it feels unfinished, I might as well take it down as I'm still going to do a new mockup pretty soon. But thanks for the comments :)
The characters are hard to see and identify what they really are. The rocks and ground look pretty good. You should finish it soon, seems like it will look good when it is finished,
Well you are right in some way... This is a WIP as I'm still working on the tileset, but I still consider this one as a ready piece. I propably won't work on this piece anymore, but I for sure will make at least one mockup more. I myself like the clouds without the AA as it makes them look more... I don't know, cloudy? But I try and see how it looks with AA. Thanks for the comment :)
You could AA the clouds a bit, and that huge black area is really distracting. And change the character's name to "Pedro", maybe. The sky looks a little rushed, and you might want to detail/texture the dirt some too. Overall a nice start. It seems like more of a WIP than ready for the gallery, though.
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