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I think you should toss the AA and add more stylization to the dithering, for say, more solid smaller triangles?
Nice work though.
The dithering that sky is a no. Please smoothen it out a bit. It's really rough atm. And try on working that transition from red to blue. I also don't see the relations between triangles-A bird-A profile-and a factory thing. They don't fit and they're random. Maybe you could try making them out of triangles to go with the theme? I'm not sure though, that's just me.