what do you suggest adding im fixing him up now

I like your attempt at shadowing and using different colors for the outlines.   However, there just isn't much to the piece, just a shiny shell/carapace/thing and some legs.  I'd say add something and make it transparent.

Diesel, "," and "." are your friends.

 How does it stands actually? its a 4 leg pokemon? if that's the case, you should reconsider how your legs are positioned, since he appears to be falling or something similar. if not, i suggest you to use a more dinamic pose.

thanks for pointing that out didnt even see it

streamofconsciousnesswhat?

Some of your lines seem very jaggedy/unnatural and inorganic. If this wasn't deliberate, I'd suggest a bit of editing on those parts. The highlight might look better if it were concave in some fashion.