I'm gonna rework this piece. Totally. The concept is fun, plus it would be neat to see exactly how more awesome I am.

(Lol I replied to jal)

I don't like the color palette in the corner. The moon is not well rounded. I do like the overall look of this.

I like it

HA! You thought it was hard to understand before!

it does look unfinished but, I'm the one who approved its submittal so whatever. It's a cool idea going on and I'd definitely love to see an updated version in the future.
On a side note, I think since this a site that welcomes critiques and the like, we should be saying what is and/or isn't to be submitted (unless, of course, it isn't pixelart or just some obvious piece of crap someone did in like 5 seconds)

Thanks for standing up for me, but he's kinda right. And I don't think that he had malicious intent. I plan to edit it and post the better. If that's possible. If not, the crazy admin people may delete this submission.

I actually could tell right away what it was, and really you dont know how much effort a person puts into a piece because you dont know if they are new to pixel art or not? and really what if they did try and someone told them there was not enough effort? but anyway i like the way it looks when he crushes through the whole earth it looks cool that would be an awesome avatar i think. its really fun to watch i dunno why i just like to watch it lool

Yeah, you're probably right. I just realised I forgot to add stars :P man, a lot of errors, now that I look twice :(

I couldn't tell what it was without reading the caption. In my personal opinion, if you don't have the time to put effort into something, you shouldn't post it. You should wait till you have time and make it the best you can. But hey, that might just be me.