I think the problem with the one on the right is that the grass doesn't have enough contrast; so it seems a little like its short but "wavy" grassy ground, rather than the long chaotic grass you are going for. Notice how the grass on the right has almost the same contrast level as the grass on the left... in short, try to throw in a few paler and darker strands of grass there and there in the rough grass background. Especially paler. The one on the left is perfect though!
WOW! The one on the left is great! I like the composition and the way you rendered the sun! The one on the right is a bit too messy for my taste, feels almost as if you lost interest in it and just finished it in a hurry.
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