Late comment is late, again D: @doomcreator the knees, i redid them like 10 times and wasnt pleased with 'em after all, thats why they still look extremely sloppy @Archeo Ehrlich gesagt wüsste ich nicht, wie ich den Übergang verbessern sollte und die Tatsache, das der bauch zu breit ist, liegt wohl daran, dass ich immernoch ne ziemliche Niete bin, was Anatomie und all dass angeht, vielleicht hät ich auch einfach mit ner Referenz arbeiten sollen, was ich net gemacht habe ^^;; @madPXL i tend to draw legs too stubby, guess i can blame my bad anatomy skills for that @surt Thanks for your crits, they help a lot :) guess i revamp the whole piece in the future when i'm more skilled @Bob Jones Actually thats supposed to be a loincloth thingy :) @[platypus] *gasp* you're right. tbh, i didn't know that before you told me @Leroy Hehe, i tend to draw pants too baggy, resulting in this "OH EM GEE HIS BALLS ARE HUEG" look Anyway, thanks for your comments
Great stuff, easily one of my favourites. Worked the colour limit magnificently. Couple of crits though:
Loincloth thingy doesn't really seem to follow the curves of the body. Seems to just hang strait down as if his belly is highly protuberant, but the evident tonedness of the belly suggests that it shouldn't be.
His left arm's pose looks very awkward (is it bracing the weapon?) and in my opinion would look more natural if it came out over the leg, to counterbalance the right arm thrown behind him.
The space between his left arm and the body looks ambiguous. It's just a void of flat colour like you forgot to fill it as trans. It looks like it would mostly be filled by the continuation of the weapon and so it should probably be darker to match the lower part and the deeper shadow behind the body.
His head seems to be not his... there are some anatomy problems with the legs (too short),his left armhand and with the shading too. it's not clear with his right hand that holding a sort of sword behind him. But interesting pose ! good job :)
Ehrlich gesagt finde ich den Übergang der Erdbeere zum Rest irgendwie schlecht. Sieht aus wie raufgeklatscht. Der Bauch ist imo zu breit. Aber sehr gut ist die Pose und die Palette. Gute Arbeit Heretic!
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@doomcreator
the knees, i redid them like 10 times and wasnt pleased with 'em after all, thats why they still look extremely sloppy
@Archeo
Ehrlich gesagt wüsste ich nicht, wie ich den Übergang verbessern sollte und die Tatsache, das der bauch zu breit ist, liegt wohl daran, dass ich immernoch ne ziemliche Niete bin, was Anatomie und all dass angeht, vielleicht hät ich auch einfach mit ner Referenz arbeiten sollen, was ich net gemacht habe ^^;;
@madPXL
i tend to draw legs too stubby, guess i can blame my bad anatomy skills for that
@surt
Thanks for your crits, they help a lot :) guess i revamp the whole piece in the future when i'm more skilled
@Bob Jones
Actually thats supposed to be a loincloth thingy :)
@[platypus]
*gasp* you're right.
tbh, i didn't know that before you told me
@Leroy
Hehe, i tend to draw pants too baggy, resulting in this "OH EM GEE HIS BALLS ARE HUEG" look
Anyway, thanks for your comments