I like the perspective a lot, the style is also very unique.

Very nice piece. Love the composition.

Thanx a lot, I' ll try that:)

ok, i get it..thanx.Well I think it was rather foolish of me to submit it for competition, but still want you can write your critic, I really need it to be better in this:)

I like the preview its alot cleaner but seems not to be pixel art.

Doom menas the icon. Rather than reducing everything (NPA) use a detail of it at 1X.
The pixel itself is very dirty and borderline oekaki.

ok, I will try to remake it, I see what you mean, but as for the nose, i did it keeping looking at my photo, so I guess I have a wron nose, hah:)
What do you mean by "try not to use one of those non pixel avatars"?
Well still thanks for constuctional critic:)

Yes it is messy. Well for some anatomical problems. The nose just juts off when it should curve onto the face. The right cheek is way out of perspective compared to the left side of the face.

BUt still nice job. Also you should try not to use one of those non pixel avatars. Good job though.