Thanx for coments, well I think I didn' t get dithering too much...Is it really important to construct it with a pixel interval? I thought it is here to reduce the contrast and it is not such strict...oh well, I am a rookie, so ... :) i really need to get how to work with that
Something everyone should keep in mind is that just because you use a style that isn't inherent of a certain piece doesn't mean the piece is "stylistic." There are some styles that will never cooperate with a subject no matter how much you push it, and it is always better to learn the rules and basics before you go around altering them.
Damn, i expected the preview image to be the actual thing. Would be much better at that size in my opinion. The dithering is horrid, it's just scribbled and gives an impression of spraycan. Your midtones are too close and the transistion between midtone and highlight is far too vast.
My tips would be to make it much smaller, take alot more time on it to get the proper textures, shading and volume. Pick your colours carefully and you've gotta figure out AAing and dithering. Check the links for tutorials, or use google. Good luck! It's a neat concept. :)
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