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That's a great piece, the colours fit the idea wonderfully.. there're a few things I'd fix though:
The leg stretching back seems a bit out of shape, I get the impression the leg would be more hidden. Also to fit the presentation style.. I'd make the shadow of the pencil the same length of the pencil (shorten the pencil a bit if you don't want the piece any bigger) and give the paper a shadow too. maybe replace the blacklining and shadow colour with the darkest colour you've got there.. the blacklined curve where the paper curls looks like it needs fixing too.