First I must admit that I speak little English so I shall put my answer in french and then translated into English by Google.
Merci pour tous vos commentaires encourageants. Je suis d'accord pour les lignes noires. Je vais essayer de faire mieux pour mon nouveau dessin. Certains ont remarqué le bg. Je l'aime beaucoup. La perspective isométrique est la plus amusante de toutes. En tous cas merci, cela me donne envie de continuer et de progresser.
Thank you for your encouraging comments. I agree with the black lines. I will try to do better for my new design. Some noted the bg. I like it very much. The isometric perspective is the most fun of all. Anyway thank you, it makes me want to continue and progress.
A bientôt.
See you soon.
This is pretty awesome for a first piece. Nice touch with the water. Have you thought about maybe adding some people or other details?
Could be funny to do this as an Unreal Tournament level