Platform Mockup 2

Platform Mockup 2

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Platform Mockup 2



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Title: Platform Mockup 2
Pixel Artist: A.B. Lazer  (Level 3 Private Eye :: 9276 points)
Posted: 12/28/2007 18:28
Statistics:  12 comments    2 faves    0 avatars

Mockup of a platform game. Please criticize. Done while listening to radio and 'The Twins' electropop.

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 4/25/2008 13:25

Разве? По-моему мокапы платформеров как раз одна из самых интересных вещей на ПиксельДжойнте. Да, вся графика рисовалась для проекта игрушки для Мегадрайва.


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Balamoot (Level 10 Maniac) @ 4/25/2008 12:51
Клёво, но почему-то от тематики платформенных скроллеров/аркад люди очень быстро устают... Ты это для игрушки рисовал или для души? )

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 12/30/2007 12:42
Thanks, will try that (but probably not at PJ).

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surt (Level 11 Godfather) @ 12/29/2007 13:04
She looks great, not a problem.
A hint of warm pink or purple might do it.

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 12/29/2007 09:12
Noted, thanks for a comment!

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greenraven (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 12/29/2007 08:18
Looks good. Only it's an interesting style, but the giant building in the background seems to slant a bit too much. (The left side with two long windows) Or maybe it's just me.

Still, great job on it.

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 12/29/2007 08:15
Thanks for a comment!
>Style of the chicky sprite is spot on.
Do you really like the character? Any complaints in this department (as I'll do animation in near future - it is real pain and better make final design before not too late)?
>touch of colour
I think I feel what you're about - I'll play with pallete in the future, but there's a problem - there's many blueish colors in the bgrnd, and more blueish on platforms would bury them and they would not stand out (they're on first plane).

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 12/29/2007 08:11
Thanks! You mean the blue back or the whole back with trees, platforms and such? Characters have black outline, while background not - it was made to make them stand out.

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surt (Level 11 Godfather) @ 12/29/2007 04:12
Really nice. Style of the chicky sprite is spot on.
I think a less extreme angle for the backdrop would serve better, 2:1 or 3:1 and you could keep the same feel without it being so severe and unnaturalistic.
Everything is cartoony colourful bar the grey metallic platforms and boxes, so they look a little out of place. If you added a subtle touch of colour to the greys it should help them fit in.

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talamaur (Level 1 Rookie) @ 12/29/2007 02:30
I think that the background and characters are made in different styles. I like the colors) but you should difine to yourself in what style all work will be done

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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 12/28/2007 23:50
Aha, thanx, got it! Although I'm fine with 45 degree buildings, your comment is second with this issue (I shown pic to one person over e-mail), so it is interesting, how people feel about this perspective.

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Vertigo-Zero (Level 9 Necrophiliac) @ 12/28/2007 22:39
The characters are really great, nice and simplistic... the buildings dont go well with that... mayb they should also have that style... at least not 3D like they are now...

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