Platform Mockup 2 :: Pixel Art Detail

Клёво, но почему-то от тематики платформенных скроллеров/аркад люди очень быстро устают... Ты это для игрушки рисовал или для души? )

Thanks, will try that (but probably not at PJ).

She looks great, not a problem.
A hint of warm pink or purple might do it.

Noted, thanks for a comment!

Looks good. Only it's an interesting style, but the giant building in the background seems to slant a bit too much. (The left side with two long windows) Or maybe it's just me.

Still, great job on it.

Thanks for a comment!
>Style of the chicky sprite is spot on.
Do you really like the character? Any complaints in this department (as I'll do animation in near future - it is real pain and better make final design before not too late)?
>touch of colour
I think I feel what you're about - I'll play with pallete in the future, but there's a problem - there's many blueish colors in the bgrnd, and more blueish on platforms would bury them and they would not stand out (they're on first plane).

Thanks! You mean the blue back or the whole back with trees, platforms and such? Characters have black outline, while background not - it was made to make them stand out.

Really nice. Style of the chicky sprite is spot on.
I think a less extreme angle for the backdrop would serve better, 2:1 or 3:1 and you could keep the same feel without it being so severe and unnaturalistic.
Everything is cartoony colourful bar the grey metallic platforms and boxes, so they look a little out of place. If you added a subtle touch of colour to the greys it should help them fit in.

I think that the background and characters are made in different styles. I like the colors) but you should difine to yourself in what style all work will be done

Aha, thanx, got it! Although I'm fine with 45 degree buildings, your comment is second with this issue (I shown pic to one person over e-mail), so it is interesting, how people feel about this perspective.

The characters are really great, nice and simplistic... the buildings dont go well with that... mayb they should also have that style... at least not 3D like they are now...