You got a tremendous amount of depth and subtle curves out of those 7 colors. Nice one.

hay! thats way better :)

Thanks. The letters is updated.

the gradient is the change of brightness on the letters. What i mean is that since the tops of the letters are very bright and the bottoms are very dark i couldnt decipher what was written on the banner. I suggest you make the bottoms of the letters brighter. the slime is fine!

Gradience?

Edit: You mean the slime hanging down from the letters?

dont do the gradient on the letters - i cant read whats written without zooming. But i like the doodle

Ah. Forgot to write in the description.

This is just the small version. Bigger version comes later.

Well the image is kidn of small. But nicely aa'ed and executed.