Nice, but you used too much pillow-shading (you've put the light on the center, with excessive colors), and there are some errors in anatomy, like tiny arms, deformed shoulders and a bad angle at the left feet (your left). The torso also doesn't have any shading, it looks flat. =/

But in overall it's good. Congratulations, keep training! ^^

(and, sorry for bad english... o,o)