I just had the urge to draw a dancer of some sort, and I've always liked the look of belly dancers. I like the colors I choose :3 C&C please! If she can be improved, I'd like to do that.
I think I may have gone overboard with dithering =\
EDIT: I changed some things based on the comments I got, but I left the preview the same so you can see the difference :3
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M.E.: Thanks for pointing all that out to me. I fixed the breasts, because that was even obvious to me. It looks much better now. I actually like the eyes a little higher like that =/ I think I'm just weird though. Thank you for the in depth crit and the compliment :3
PixelSpy: Thanks for the comment. Why does the dithering on the skin tone bother you? :3 If you can tell me in detail, I'll try to fix it. Thanks again!
She is pretty. Agreed, tho, the facial volumes could use a slight tweak, maybe take some of the bulk out of her left cheek? I realize there is stylistic prerogative, but maybe consider darker outlines like you did near her armpit.
Proportion-wise there are some things you can change. Eyes are about half way in the head. Since the rest looks pretty ok, I would make the eyes smaller and lower. Also move the breast a bit down. There should be about a head-length below the actual head to get to the end of the breasts ("about one head" since there are different sized proportions around :) ) I compliment you on the hands. They are really nicely done!
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