The lines weren't very different, but the overall shading/compostition was. And I'm not sure what you were trying to say there, it might have been understandable if you would take the time to write out your message in proper grammar :)
So just drop it, Bloo has learned his lesson :)
Hah, the way Jal puts it makes me look like a bad guy. I'm sorry for being so critical Bloo. Truely!
Bloo, I wish to see that in the future. Like Jal said, it was an improvement and I want to see you improve more :)
You have potential, I beleive that.
And gethering points? There is a place called the Queue where you can vote yes or no to approve a peice into the gallery. If the score is too low it (probably) won't be accepted. There is no way you can view a score.
If you claim to "have followed Paxjah's book style carefully" how can you possibly claim to have the EXACT lines, apart from the smaller sides.
Why not do your own work from scratch from now on???
Reference, eh? Why do you have the same exact lines as theirs?
This seems to be an edit of this peice:
The lines are great but the shading makes no sense.
I would also take away those horizontal lines that are supposed to be pages.