Thanks for your feedback Hatch.

I`m concidering a radical overhaul of this picture at the moment. I have a few ideas but it does look likely the bedroom backdrop is going to be removed for something else.
Watch this space

The trouble with the room is that it has zero perspective. It looks like it'd be a real simple one-point if you wanted to get into it.

Really dig it otherwise btw :D

xXhalfieXx: Yeah, I know what you mean. This picture has been bugging me since I posted it. There's definitely an issue with conflicting styles going on. I can't let this go as it is. I`ll take a look during my lunch break to see if I can add a bit more 3dness to the girl and room furniture.
Thanks for your critique so far. It's been really helpful

Darth Mandarb: There was something niggling me about the colours and you hit the nail on the head. I`ve fixed them now. Do you think it's about right?

Awesome! Love the monsters expression, and the little girl's expression of absolute trust :)

This rocks, i love the girl design aswell, reminds me of Monsters Inc a little :P Luv it!

Feels a tiny bit over-saturated to me ... but still a wonderfully imaginative piece!  Great job!

I think that the monster makes everything else in the room look flat. But it's still good  :)