The wings make this piece amazing.
As previously said the skin needs work, maybe go for lighter shadows.

hair is too long at the front, the arm on left is a little fat but i love the wings

The hair is pretty badly pillow shaded, in fact it all is. Try shading in accordance of the location og the lightsource. The pose is good thought.

is it a she or a he??? ^^ the body is kinda waayyyy off tbh, th shadin just doesnt look rite, the wings are pretty good tho, and the hair is also alright, i think u need to loosen  and try to cut down on the heavy shadin :D

 The shading on the belly is way too heavy and dark, pleh.

I like the shading on the hair, it looks very full.  But I'm not so sure about the skin.  The shadows are too dark and thin, and they should be molded around the shape of the angel, not the outline.