Ok, I'll try to improve it more :D

Yes.

But still not perfect. You have some extra colors and misc. issues concerning light and color.

But overall an improvement. If you wish to take this further, take another look at our edits :)

er....better? :s

BlackDragons edit might be really helpful in terms of lighting, and most of the colors. It looks a bit flat, but I guess it's how Bisque does it too. The only bad thing about it is the blue paper in my opininion. I recommend something closer to your own concept:

How is this way too small. Some of the the rips you posted are smaller than this

Also Bloo, please really try to learn from my edits, I feel you are not doing anything with them

Well, it is a DA avatar A DA avatar is 50x50 pixels maximum.

its cute, but WAYYY to small.

Lizbeth, please stop spamming. You could have said that on just one box

Quit spamming.  

Wow, nice edit! I'll try to remake this.

Hello Bloo. Nice art, but it could use some improvement.

I made an edit for you.

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p203/blackdragon_photo_bucket/BottleEdit.png

Just gonna list some points:

Pay close attention to the AA and color values. Bisque generally does not have extremely dark selout values but rather shows some color. She selouts her whites in blue, instead of the brown you used. I shaved the pixels off of the lip to make it appear more smooth. She cell shades, which you did not do.  As a general rule, do not outline things "in" the outlines. On the colors themselves, Bisque uses lighter, greens with a hint of yellow. Use sufficient contrast especially in your AA. Make sure it is as close as a midtone as you can.  

This could be done with 6 colors and look exactly the same.  Other than that, it's nice.
Is it supposed to look like a watermelon?

I like the concept, it's really cute. I think it's quite readable. But 13 colors? The selout-ish thing is really unnoticable. I advise increasing contrast there or just simply reducing color-count.

Im not getting more sense to it anyway. You should fix so it look'ls like a paper in the flask not like a two green fingers holding it :)

Yes, it is XD. Please tell that to Hulin :3

I think its supposed to be a paper (in a bottle) right?

The  top of the flask look's really odd. Somthing lika a gripping arm not a cork.