Night city

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Title: Night city
Pixel Artist: neugene  (Level 1 Rookie :: 15 points)
Posted: 5/14/2008 13:37
Statistics:  7 comments    0 faves    0 avatars

It's my first pixel art work! What do you think about it? Need constructive critic! Plz... :-)

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neugene (Level 1 Rookie) @ 6/27/2008 08:11
Hmmmm...thanks!

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neugene (Level 1 Rookie) @ 6/27/2008 08:01
thanks, Lollige! I make my first steps! I have miilion ideas in my mind, but I can't realize it, I have no much experience.

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Hapiel (Level 11 Bonsai) @ 6/8/2008 06:14
Why does only one side of the lamp shine?
Ok, now for the C&C:

Stop dithering that much! 90% of the time things look better without dithering.
I think there is a bit too much contrast with the outline of the roof and the rest of it.
Also I would place the moon on a different spot, it looks like a part of the clouds now.

However, you shaped those clouds really nice!
Continue like this and you will be fine ;), and don't forget you don't need to dither everything!

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neugene (Level 1 Rookie) @ 5/15/2008 09:32
I try so hard!

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japez (Level 1 Depressed) @ 5/15/2008 02:43
Wow, Very impressive for a first timer.

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Solitude (Level 1 Rookie) @ 5/15/2008 00:12
Impressive.  I'm going to upload my first pixel art in the next week or so and I don't think it's going to be nearly as impressive as this.  Some things in this work still doesn't look right, but unfortunately I do not have the knowledge to tell you what it is.  For a first attempt I think it's great.  I hope that you get some experienced people leaving good constructive comments.

Have a great time!

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Talos (Level 5 Soldier) @ 5/14/2008 15:44
good for your first. The realism is alot better than my first, which I refuse to show . Those reaally pink highlights are wierd andd your clouds are sorta cartoony, but you're well on your way.

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