Lovely colurs, so beautifull to look at. I would do something with the blue patterns on her skirt thoug. Where the supposed shade is on them it just looks like a diferent colour in the material, maybe if you make it darker or lighter, play around, it might look better. Oh and an other thing, where are her boobies? she´s a flat chest . How dissapointing.
Could you tell me more about this game of yours? I like majking games and seeing others do game projects too. :)