I think it's the gradient that is on the chunk of hair that angles slightly right (~18 degrees) that jars my eye. I suggest bringing down the bright point to be below the bright point of the gradient to its immediate left. Otherwise, this is my favorite of your art, which is saying something cause I like your art a lot.
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