you've got the basics down well in this one - it just looks unfinished to me. everything is in the right place, the angles are right, it all works out great - it just looks a bit too.. clean! it would look a lot more interesting with some subtle textures thrown around here and there. for example: tiles on the sidewalk, asphalt on the road.
apart from the basic look, i think this is pretty good. it reminds me of when i was pixelling around in the simcity 2000 urban renewal kit (scurk!)
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