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I think the white "thing" should be more shaded. But I like the animation! :)
Blocking? It looks like he's being attacked by some ghoul ro something. And the ghoul is winning. His face looks skullish - no nose and odd skull-like teeth.
I don't really like the collar thing. And how the shit just moves way back and then magically comes into place again.
same here, a bit too unfinished for the gallery but once finished this will deffo accumulate quite a number of faves.
* once you finished it, you should invest a few minutes in the preview-thumb.. the current is ugly as hell
Very nice. The only thing I'm not sure about, is the shirt getting so untcuked that it hides the belt & the pleat lines in the pants during the animation. Especially since the animation reverses and the shirt seems to magically tuck back in and expose the belt again but more importantly... we lose the nice shading you did on the first frame on the pants/jacket/shoes. I know that's a bit nit-picking, but I think it could look better if you continued shading all the frames. Great job regardless, and i think the animation is awesome.
EDIT: I guess i missed the part where you said you intend to color it in more in another program.
I agree with kvetacek.