tomic then help me out i am a noob @ pixelart and it was my first try..
i have to second tinc.. redux/paint over. and probably one of the ugliest i've seen so far =/
Don't comment on your own images unless addressing a comment, use the edit description button.
Also, looks like a messy color redux.
@up.
OK I won't post such comments anymore, and i'll try to fix the palette.
If you're looking for help, you can get feedback in the forums both here and at pixelation.
Very useful feedback, their criticisms and suggestions will help you improve more than anything else.