I like the character a lot, but I think the pose is a bit bland. There doesn't seem to be too much of a sense of flow; I think a lot of it is the placement of her legs. They way they are, they form a triangle which captures eye flow. I would suggest moving or rotating her right (our left) leg a bit to break up that triangle; I dunno if anyone else even sees it that way, though...
Looks really cool. I like the face and the skintones the most. The chest looks a bit too flat but my only real crit is that I'm sure you could have done this with less colors.
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