"Hope the lack of background doesn't bring the piece down too much."

IMO, a uniform background brings the focus intensively on the subject. I really like the whole, except the palette: maybe darker colors would do a better job

best its impossible..REAL pixel art.... congratulations

Amazingly done, perhaps too much dithering though...

that's amazing!!

Textures are great, but I really don't think we'd be able to see more than a profile view of the nipples from this angle; makes the breasts look rather strange.

interesting palette choice!  I like this a lot!

oh what a beauty do we have here?

I think you should make it so that shes lieing on her right breast (camera is you)

Those are some beautiful colors you got there. Sorry for lack of better critique. :)

I agree with Arachne on the edit suggestion, but it still looks great as is. You'd just have to be very flexible to get in that position!

It's a beautiful piece, but it has a lot of fundamental flaws that I think would be difficult to fix without having to redraw most of it. Maybe if you did something like this, but that would still require a lot of work. I think it also needs more contrast and a clearly defined light source to add volume. Darkening the darkest shades would help somewhat.

If you have unfinished pieces, maybe posting them in the forums would help motivate you? You might get someone to show you how to fix things you're not sure of. It would also make it easier to fix mistakes if you're aware of them early on.

Wow.