This isn't exactly much. I think you should have looked up how a living shrimp actually looks. Also, such a small piece really needs a bit more to go with it. Perhaps draw a few other crustaceans together in an underwater scene. Maybe add some algae or coral. I'd spend a little more time on it.
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