Looks good!  I like both versions!

Thank you for your words! I think this opinion has good substance, so I tried it.

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/p/i/pinwizz/_LOGO4b.PNG

Cannot say anything solid - I'm on LCD now. LCD,,, Anyway, I gonna try it on another monitor to see how this changed the look.

I like the use of high sat and nontraditional stuff in your work.  I think this one would be better with out the small glare on the wording or the blue outline.  To clarify, I like the impressed blue on the lower right just not the outline on the upper left.  Only my opinion though.

B-but there is VAST space for imagination!

BTW, check out my piece called Autumn UFOs - maybe you'll not be so dissapointed with it's title.

When I first saw the yellow bikinis, I thought they were just tanlines and the two little pixel redheads were in going "au naturel". Hott! Then I read the sign that said "swimsuit" and I was like, awwwwww, not as sexy.