The preview is not pixel art and must be altered to conform to the rules of the site. Thanks. As for the art itself, the color count is too high and the contrast is too low. Have larger jumps between each shade and thus use fewer colors. The pose isn't dynamic enough, and his arm has some unnecessary dithering.
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