Oops, thanks a lot for the critique Arachne. I completely forgot to respond to your comment! I will possibly do an edit to this because I agree with your changes. I just need to get around to it, heh.
It's a very good start. Nice use of colors, and the hair looks great, but there are a few things I'd change about the face.
I think the nose and mouth need to be moved inwards towards the skull, a slightly smaller chin and the left eye moved a bit more to the left and also shrunken a bit.
The lower part of the chin and jaw could use some darker shading to make the edge look less sharp. Instead of separating the lips with a black line, you could show that the two surfaces are angled differently by darkening the upper lip. I also think the highlight on the upper lip would look more natural if extended a bit.
The yellow skin shade could be toned down a bit to make the white more visible, and the pink could be darkened to fit better between the nearest two skin shades.
The AA could also be more consistent since some parts are more jagged than others.
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this looks good i like the highlight on the hair. thing around meck seems off.