Haha awesomesauce

Thaaaat's not Superfrog.
This guy is!  http://hol.abime.net/2223

Nice lil pic though. :P

I love it!

Thanks for the tip elwin that was great advice! And thanks for the follow up halfie!

I cleaned up the lines and tried some contrast like you suggested I hope it looks better (:

It was not meant to be discouraging at all. I think there are some spots on the line art that needs some touching up; such as his right elbow, the lower part of his left leg, and the very left pixel on his right thigh. It's just some minor things.

http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb184/plutoking/edit-8.png i made a quick edit to show you how you could do. contrast is extremely important. it makes your image more 3D, and makes it 'pop out' more (;

Thanks, it was supposed to look chunky and chizzled  like a muscular superhero. I guess I just didn't do it very well >.<

Unfortunately a lot of people tend to be blunt and not too terribly tactful when they leave comments on this site- he probably means some of your lines aren't single-pixeled width which can make some chunky looking/inconsistent edges (though I dont' even see that many instances of it.. I'm new at this myself). http://www.derekyu.com/?page_id=218 goes into the logistics of that, though maybe you've seen it already ? :| Don't be discouraged. :P

Well that's a nice first comment to receive on the site.. I know I'm not very good. What do you mean by sloppy?

Clean up the lines, they look sloppy.