Geez. I looked at this on my monitor at work today, and man are the colors totally not what I see on my laptop. Way oversaturated. Oh well, can't do anything about it until the challenge is over.
I'm actually not glad I made this one. I shouldn't have had to make it. I hate this one. My other piece (April Showers) is (to me) way better. It's just that this was the only way I could think to please the nay-sayers and still have (somewhat) my original concept.
I dislike the shadow. The pink outline makes it looks...well, like it's not pixeled well. I'd remove some of the unnecessary pink around it to give it a more blended and natural look. Her buttock looks a little unshapely too, as if its elongated behind her spine. I actually think the breast looks fine, albeit it may be a bit unneccessary- but it's perfectly natural looking. I can see why you have the soap marks angled the way you do, but that's too much thought required on the viewer's part. I think that if you made them a bit simpler and a little more uniform it'd be easier to understand. Also, I believe the soap marks should be desaturated a bit. Soap gets naturally foamy in water, and that looks a bit too much like syrup.
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I'm actually not glad I made this one. I shouldn't have had to make it. I hate this one. My other piece (April Showers) is (to me) way better. It's just that this was the only way I could think to please the nay-sayers and still have (somewhat) my original concept.