lol

no

Ya... the shading isnt very good... especially near the handle on the bottom one I think... P.S. work on your spelling lol!

the top could use some work, its too skinny, and i dont like he yello i like the bottom, but it needs a lil work on tha shading not bad

Thanks fawful! And well the second one will look better cuase I made em acording to real weapons (from a game) So I can exactly change any of the line art... yet I think the left of the second one needs more shading and contrast. And I must be tired becuase this post was pretty confusing...

Keyblades!

They lack shinyness and contrast,but the shape is snazzy!

The second one looks the best of the two,detail does that but the colours are better and so is the lineart,good stuff man!

So up contrast with shading? Ok Ill give it a go... Thanks for posting!

I think you should raise the contrast of the shadows, specially in the normal keyblade.
The linearts are cool, tho.

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