This is my latest creation which is based on a character who is a looter and try's to loot a market , as you can see all the fruits on his sword..lol....This is one of my best creation.
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The B.O.B. (Level 11 Master Assassin) @ 1/14/2009 02:25
and enough have voted to send this back...again...
I am making excuses ? alright maybe i am but i am telling the right thing ill start with something simple now cause i am still learning and improving over time.
1. Ill update the jaggy lines and make it smooth and do some AA 2. The swords are meant to have that shading cause the light is coming from the left middle. 3. The arm seems longer because he is wearing a robe and the left arm is pulled back as you could see from the sleaves at the bottom of the right arm. 4. I will not improve on colours i am sorry but i like the pallete and the colours. 5. Ill improve on other things you said.
you need to work on your line work, its a little jaggy. Not just on the black outlines, but also the shapes in the shading. Look for a tutorial on how to create clean and smooth lines in pixel art, its a little hard to explain without using images, but heres the first thing google came up with for tutorials: http://www.zybez.net/community/index.php?showtopic=724901 Im also not sure why some outlines just start and stop in random places (its in your other peices too) the shading is a little wierd, and lighting seems a little inconsistant. The fact that the shadows on the swords are darker than any other shadows in the peice is also wierd. Also as far as anatomy goes, his arms have 3 joints and one arm is longer than the other. look up how to shade spheres correctly, the way the fruit are shaded looks flat. as far as the pallate goes, its a little odd. I mean, if youre going into a shadow, saturation should either get increasingly higher or lower, the darker your color gets. ON your fruit though, the saturation is all over the place. IN the fruit the saturation goes (from lightest to darkest color) 36,89,32,96,96,81, which I think is 1 reason it looks odd to me. Anyway sorry to be so critical but I hope this helps you.
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