Chocoburkey! instead of 'WARK" its says "GOBBLARK"
Isnt dithering tough!? I hate it! But that hate can turn it into a strong point :)
Abolishing the lineart around the curves would improve it in my opinon, but since you are focusing on the dithering, i'll shut my yap now.
I Like the neck the most. The feather pattern looks neat, and the contour lines on the neck and back of head are neat-o! You should use those contour lines more often!
I'd love to see this animated, excellent work, the only critique I have is that the eye stands out a tad too much. Still it might just be a stylizing decision. Kudos :)
Theres a white patch above the head in the preview
very good peice man, my one crit is that the body/chest looks a bit pillow-shaded along with the leg fluff close to us, my favourite part is the wing=). * * * * *
Yep, he doesn't represent perfection exacly, I'd say he's still on of my 
Chocobo!!!!!!!!!!!