did this one quickly to have an avatar in the forums
I don't think I'll retouch it though, it was meant to be temporary.
but, I would not mind comments on how to improve it, here is what I would change:
- add detail in lower-left of t-shirt (looks flat)
- add more contrast for more depth
- salvage 2 horizontal lines to finish off the part of the hand that is out of the picture
- work on the neck-to-shoulder area, the head looks floating just a tad
- work on the hand, it's a difficult angle
- work on the forearm's perspective, it looks a bit skewed.
again, any comments are welcome
cheers! |
