Thanks for the feed backs mate.

This is your best so far.

-Luis

Thanks metaldev for your comments.

i really like this one arylic, nice job.

Thanks saporion

You're improving. (:

I know i define it as same....lol.... Ok but i hope it would be accepted.  Ok thanks though mate.

Saturation isn't how light/dark a colour is, it's how bright/dull. Oh, by the way, it takes a while for something to be accepted, just depends on how much stuff is in there. There's also one green pixel on the left side of the face in the fur.

Thanks lollige, but i need your critics to complete and find that minor bugs.

Thanks jeremy, but i really do like and prefer the dark pallets rather then saturated. Also i have updated it with your further comments.

Vast improvement over your earlier stuff. You still need to clean up your lines before colouring (esp. on the hand). You're playing around with hue, which is good, but not so much with saturation And your ramps are still pretty straight. Your highlights are also really stark against the rest and you have a couple of stray dark green px which were probably your background colour.

Here's a quick edit to show what I meant tho' I changed the colours a bit too much hue wise. (I imagined the spirit to be like an Orangutan)

If you can find those minor bugs, why don't you fix 'm? I would not like to say it is perfect, however in my opinion just good enough to get accepted into the gallery :)

Ok updated. Anything else ? i i don't understand why this haven't been accepted to the gallery, its perfect;y fine..except for some minor bugs.

Ok, ill remove the black outlines. Thanks mate.

i can see a real improvement here arylic, your not clattering it with dithering, your palettes nyehh good. but nonethe less best so far!

i suggest removing that black outline, and on other spots, it will better this peice