His arm is definitely too long. Like, if he were to let it rest at his side, it'd probably be around or past his knee, whereas normally I think the arm comes down to about the middle of the thigh. You could fix this by either moving his forearm to the right, closer to the shoulder, or by moving his shoulder closer to the forearm.
I realize that you based these on the artwork, but just because it's that way in the artwork doesn't mean you should sacrifice anatomical accuracy to make it that way... or, well, as anatomically accurate as these are, at least.
Other than the arm, though, they're both very good. Recognizable at first glance, well detailed, and well shaded.
If you think the arm is too long, you should have seen it in the wip stage. His arm is supposed to reach around that length because it is suppose to go past the scarf in that pose. I think the scarf is fine as is, I don't want to over do it...
Very nice, looking forward to seeing other characters.
i think its a pretty nice style, but his left arm is way too long. i think the scarf could use a little more work cus it looks kind of plain, maybe if you use other colors it would look better.
apart from that, i really like it. it looks very detailed.
I guess I will fix it on the next update. Right now, I just don't feel like doing it...