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chanfan's thigh has the right thickness, but loses the crazy hip motion in being so attached. I recommend a similar "fattening," but concentrating on top and bottom (not just bottom) and perhaps a slight rotation to keep the swing. And I disagree with bringing the body forwards, it confuses the flow and composition of the stance. i'm all for a sense of correctness where it applies, but here it breaks the image pretty badly.
The left thigh could be a little fatter, but not as fat as chanfan made it. Other than that it's pretty awesome.
I really like her face!
BUT:
I think her stance looks unbalanced, her upper body needs te be moved a bit forward. Also her left thigh is waaaay to skinny compared to her right one. You need to thicken the part that goes into her hip, remember that the thigh connects with the butt, but right now, it doesn't.
I hope you don't mind but I just made a quick edit so you can see what I mean: http://www.arvidwessman.com/paintover.png
I hope my C&C made sense 
Keep up the good work!
really nice work on her face!